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Spin Zone / Re: Trump v DeSantis 2024
« on: March 20, 2023, 02:47:19 AM »https://donsurber.substack.com/p/libs-want-a-trump-desantis-war
Good LORD!
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I’d like to see their denunciations when rhetoric was used against Trump was the type they complain about that he uses.
Grammar! Punctuation! Proofread and edit! Here, I have to do it:
I’d like to see their denunciations,(comma!) when rhetoric that was used against Trump was the type they complain about, (comma!)that he uses.
Or better: I’d like to see their denunciations when rhetoric was used against Trump of the type they complain about when he uses it.
No comma necessary because it flows clearly.
That being said, it’s a great article and spot on. Obviously a thoughtful journalist; why the hell can’t he write?
I’m going back to sleep and dream people can speak and write good English anymore.